I’m extremely hesitant to endorse or offer a hard-and-fast rule for ensuring that clauses linked by the conditional negator “unless” will always make sense. As you pointed out, it’s generally true that for clauses linked by “unless,” the sentence takes either the “Positive Clause + unless + Negative Clause” pattern or the “Negative Clause + unless + Positive Clause” pattern, as in the sentences “You may smoke
unless not allowed to do so” or “You may not smoke
unless allowed to do so,” respectively. However, I think that the more reliable determinants for the semantic and logical soundness of “unless”-linked clauses are the grammar, operative verb, sense, and logic of the clauses themselves.
Take the case of this example that you’ve offered: “You’ll be sick
unless you stop eating.” This sentence clearly doesn’t follow either of the two patterns you presented above, and neither of the two clauses linked by “unless” has the negator “not” or any of its equivalents. Instead, what we have here are two affirmative statements linked by “unless” following this structure:
“Affirmative statement 1 + unless + affirmative statement 2.” Evidently, what’s at work here isn’t just the mechanical structure of the linkage but the collective sense and meaning created by all of the grammatical elements, the verb in particular, that constitute the sentence.
To further validate this point, let’s take a look at further variations of some of the other sentences you presented:
Original: “You'll be sick unless you stop eating.”
Variations:1. “You’ll be sick
unless you start eating.”
2. “You’ll be sick
unless the weather clears.”
3. “You’ll be sick
unless you get enough rest.”
4. “You’ll be sick
unless you take this medication.”
Comment: The clauses neither follow the two patterns you provided nor have explicit negators within them. The linking conditional negator “unless” suffices.
Original: “I’ll make dinner
unless somebody else wants to.”
Variations:1. “I’ll make dinner
unless you want to order fast-food.”
2. “I’ll make dinner
unless last night’s leftover food is OK with you.”
3. “I’ll make dinner
unless your meeting tonight is pushing through.”
4. “I’ll make dinner
unless you want to make dinner yourself.”
Comment: None of the “unless”-linked clauses is structured negatively. The linking conditional negator “unless” suffices.
We can go on and on with so many other examples of “unless”-linked clauses that are not governed by the patterns you described, but to eliminate all uncertainty on whether the sentences they form are grammatically, semantically or logically aboveboard, we just have to check them individually and let our inner ear decide if they make perfect sense or not. It’s in the nature of language, especially English I must say, to allow for lots of play beyond the basic rules we are taught in grammar school.
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