Hi Sir,
I would just like to ask what you mean by the comment "grammatically awkward"? From what I understand, it means something that is not outrightly wrong grammatically speaking. In your comment on the rewritten Manila Times article, how can the use of the infinitive phrase as direct object be possibly outright faulty if it is only grammatically awkward? Perhaps I'm just confused with the expression "if not..." Does that mean that if you use strict standards, the sentence would be faulty instead of just awkward? Also, how can the infinitive phrase be faulty when used as direct object in this sentence? Don't infinitives act as nouns as well? I'd also like to know how I can avoid grammatical awkwardness because I used to get that comment in my papers a lot during college.
PS.
Thanks, sir, for today's media watch! We're very lucky to have people who keep the standards high.