Jose Carillo's English Forum
The Latest Buzz! => Site Announcements => Topic started by: Simple Machines on March 14, 2009, 08:27:09 PM
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Welcome to Jose Carillo's English Forum!
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Have a nice time in your quest for better English!
Joe Carillo
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May I correct what is written on this poster?
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Safety the important things. (Following are important safety rules for you to know; the management will not shoulder, if anything is lost.)
1. Throw all plastic (and) cellophane in the socks that (are) hung in (or ON either one is correct) the tree.
(Throw all empty plastic and cellophane bags in the socks that are hanging on the tree.)
2. Throw the biodegradable in the rubber garbage
3. Please don’t throw anywhere the bones, cadies, ice cream pop wrappers, waste of fruits, cigarette buts. Throw (them) in the garbage.
3. Don’t broke (break) the bottle (empty bottles), specially softdrinks (soft drinks), beer, and hard liquor. Once you (are) caught (the) penalty (is) P100.00.
(Don’t break empty bottles, specially soft drinks, beer, and hard liquor. Once you are caught the penalty is P100.00.)
4. Stay were (where) you are (in your) occupied cottage.
(Stay where you are in the cottage you occupy.)
5. Once you (are) caught when (being in another cottage) stay other cottage, you should pay another for that cottage.
(Once you are caught staying in another cottage, you shall pay additional fee.)
6. During early time. Please don’t stay or sit the other cottage. So that we can identified cottage that are available for other customers come in. (During early time, please don’t stay or sit in other cottages unless you are visiting friends so in this way we can identify which cottage is available for other customers.)
Be discipline ourselves. This rules should be follow.
(Be disciplined by following these rules.)
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Thank you for your post. However, may I request that you post this message to the "Badly Written, Badly Spoken" section instead so that it will form a thread with its own subject?
Also, it appears that the picture you included is broken in some way. Perhaps it was simply copied incorrectly?
Thank you.
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Hi. Your forum looks almost exactly like ours which isn't so bad. It's just easier for me to find my way around. :) I'm glad to be a member of this site since this will be of great help to me in helping my students be better communicators in English.