Author Topic: Two subject-verb disagreement errors in a row committed by noted columnist?  (Read 14299 times)

Sphinx

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In her column in the Philippine Daily Inquirer last December 24, 2011 (“Soft underbelly of the Supreme Court”), Solita Monsod wrote: “Five opinions were uploaded on the website, all regarding the Arroyo-De Lima brouhaha. Justice Antonio Carpio and Justice Maria Lourdes Sereno each have a dissenting opinion, Justice Arturo Brion and Justice Presbitero Velasco each have a separate opinion....” (italicization mine).

The underscored words are egregiously in disagreement, right?
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Joe Carillo

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Like you, Sphinx, my feeling at first blush was that this sentence from Ms. Monsod’s column has two subject-verb disagreement errors in quick succession: “Justice Antonio Carpio and Justice Maria Lourdes Sereno each have a dissenting opinion, Justice Arturo Brion and Justice Presbitero Velasco each have a separate opinion....” My thinking was that since the pronoun “each” in both instances is singular, the operative verb should be the singular “has” rather than the plural “have,” so that sentence should be corrected as follows: “Justice Antonio Carpio and Justice Maria Lourdes Sereno each has a dissenting opinion, Justice Arturo Brion and Justice Presbitero Velasco each has a separate opinion....”   
 
However, it turns out that the usage of “each” in such constructions is more contentious and controversial than I thought, and that “each” in such constructions can also be viewed as an "adjective following a plural noun subject." In any case, way back in 1969, the Usage Panel of the American Heritage Dictionary of the English Language (AHD) rejected the usage of the plural “each” in “they each have large followings” by a whopping 95 percent—meaning, of course, that only 5 percent thought that the usage of “each have” in that construction is correct. (Click this link to “Wordsmiths: They Also Serve Who Only Vote on ‘Ain’t’,” a New York Times feature article on the workings of the AHD Usage Panel.) But it appears that the AHD had since upheld the correctness of “each have” in such constructions, as indicated in this usage note in 2010 for its 4th edition :

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Usage Note: The traditional rule holds that the subject of a sentence beginning with each is grammatically singular, and the verb and following pronouns must be singular accordingly: Each of the apartments has (not have) its (not their) own private entrance (not entrances). When each follows a plural subject, however, the verb and subsequent pronouns remain in the plural: The apartments each have their own private entrances (not has its own private entrance). But when each follows the verb with we as its subject, the rule has an exception. One may say either We boys have each our own room or We boys have each his own room, though the latter form may strike readers as stilted. • The expression each and every is likewise followed by a singular verb and, at least in formal style, by a singular pronoun: Each and every driver knows (not know) what his or her (not their) job is to be.

On the other hand, the online Merriam-Webster’s Dictionary of English Usage (MWD) has been firmly in favor of the plural “each have” all along, even commenting that the members of the AHD Usage Panel “were marching alone, apparently,” in their 95:5 rejection of the plural “each have.” The MWD cites several English-language authorities and the 1982 edition of the AHD itself as approving the plural pronoun in such instances, then offers the following examples of that construction, among others:

“Our containerboard mills each conduct five-year programs.”—Annual Report, Owens Illinois, 1970

“If we and our Atlantic community partners each take our respective share.”—Dean Acheson, U.S. State Dept. Bulletin, 12 June 1950

(Click this link to the full discussion by the MWD of the “each have” usage)

So where do these differing opinions on the plural “each have” lead us?

I think that as in the case of the Philippine Supreme Court, we should decide on this collegially and follow the rule of the majority of the English-language authorities. This means, of course, that Ms. Monsod’s use of “each have” in her column –and the Inquirer’s acceptance of it—is  grammatically correct and beyond contestation.

If anyone remains uncomfortable with the plural “each have,” however, I suggest this alternative: knock off “each” in both instances from the sentence so it can use the plural “have,” as follows: “Justice Antonio Carpio and Justice Maria Lourdes Sereno have separate dissenting opinions, Justice Arturo Brion and Justice Presbitero Velasco have separate opinions....”

That should settle the matter for good.
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Joe Carillo

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SHORT TAKES IN MY MEDIA ENGLISH WATCH:

(1) Philippine Daily Inquirer: Misuse of the intransitive verb “robbed” in headline

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P800,000 cash robbed from crematory home in Makati

MANILA, Philippines—A crematory home in Makati City fell prey to still unidentified suspects who carted away P800,000 cash Thursday afternoon, police said.

Senior Police Officer 1 Jemcie Acosta said that four unidentified armed suspects were able to enter the BM Cremation Services in ANSA 11 building along Pasong Tamo corner Mojo Street, Makati City around 1: 15 p.m. by indiscriminately firing their guns at the office.

The headline of the news story above, “P800,000 cash robbed from crematory home in Makati,” misuses the intransitive verb “rob,” which means “to commit robbery.” The PhP800,000 in cash couldn’t have been robbed, of course; it was the crematory home that was robbed of that cash by the armed thieves. The correct verb is the intransitive “stolen,” which means the cash was “taken away wrongfully,” so that headline should have read as follows:

P800,000 cash stolen from crematory home in Makati

Alternatively, that headline can be constructed as follows:

Crematory home in Makati robbed of P800,000 cash
or
Thieves rob crematory home of P800,000 in cash

(2) Philippine Daily Inquirer: Superfluous use of the adverb “just”

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Firemen’s prompt response saves family of five

Responding firefighters arrived just in the nick of time to save a family of five who were trapped inside a burning building beside Mandaluyong Medical Center before dawn yesterday.

“If we [had] arrived a few minutes later, all of them would have died of suffocation,” arson investigator SFO1 Victorio Tablay said in a phone interview.

The lead sentence above superfluously rubs in the figurative expression “in the nick of time” by modifying it with the adverb “just.” That expression, which means “a final critical moment,” already subsumes the “just” aspect, so “just” must be dropped from that sentence as follows:

“Responding firefighters arrived in the nick of time to save a family of five who were trapped inside a burning building beside Mandaluyong Medical Center before dawn yesterday.”

(3) The Philippine Star: Misuse of prepositions

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Police raid fireworks stalls in Kidapawan
 
KIDAPAWAN CITY, Philippines – Police operatives raided several fireworks selling areas here that resulted to the apprehension of prohibited firecrackers and pyrotechnic devices.

The confiscated products included pla-pla, triangle, kuwitis, pop-pop, Judas belt, and piccolo, among others.

The raid came after the city government was informed of the sale of illegal firecrackers in the area amid prohibition. Police immediately destroyed the apprehended products.

The lead sentence above commits the classic misuse of the preposition “to” in the relative phrase “that resulted to the apprehension of”; the correct preposition is “in,” so that phrase should read as “that resulted in the apprehension of.” Also, the first sentence of the third paragraph misuses the preposition “amid,” which means “during” or “in the middle of,” in the phrase “amid prohibition.” The correct preposition is “despite,” meaning “in defiance or contempt of,” so the phrase “amid prohibition” should read as “despite the prohibition” instead.

Sphinx

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Your “final solution” to the problem was well taken... It makes more sense.  Why waste ink for another word (“each”) that adds very little meaning, if at all, to what the writer was trying to say? “They have separate opinions” is perfect. Why spoil it and discombobulate the readers by writing instead, “They EACH have separate opinions”? For what purpose was “each” inserted there?

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If you remove the word "each" from the phrase "Justice Antonio Carpio and Justice Maria Lourdes Sereno each have a dissenting opinion", it is not clear whether there were two separate dissenting opinions or there was one dissenting opinion which was prepared by the two justices.  To me, inserting the word "each" makes it succinctly clear that there were separate opinions.

Dhillier

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It is important to note that they are still human and yes they can commit mistakes. I just hope it wouldn't be that much in their coming columns.