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« on: June 21, 2011, 08:43:26 PM »
Hi, Joe!
I read the latest essay you posted in the Forum titled "A sorry trail of wasted words," and some parts of that essay brought me another confusion about the English language.
I always thought that uncountable/abstract nouns like jewelry, news, information, beauty, anger, etc. can't be preceded by the indefinite article a/an. But I recently read in an English grammar and usage book that uncountable nouns can occur with the indefinite article when they follow an adjective as with this sentence: "There's a terrible sadness in her eyes." Is this sentence correct? Can I also construct similar sentences with other uncountable nouns like information and scenery? But sentences like "I have an amazing news for you" and "I'll show you a very beautiful jewelry" don't sound and look right to me.
But you did use the indefinite article with some uncountable/abstract nouns in your essay. Here are the sentences I'm referring to:
Some stock phrases in English are inherently undesirable because they are too wordy and only tend to give a false depth and emphasis to what is being said.
Of course, the problem can be remedied by simply dropping the extraneous words in the repeater phrase, but we need to cultivate a strong sensitivity to the repetition that often hides so well in such phrases.
Your sentences seem all right to me, but the other examples I presented don't. Why is that? Aren't all the nouns I used in my examples and the ones you used in your essay in the same category? Please help me understand.