I saw this post on PRC Fb page posted on September 15, 2020. (see attachment). I did not inlcude the entire post.
Is my correction correct:
The two-fold objective of the system gives CPD providers and professionals equal opportunity to process......which includes application as CPD provoder, uploading....
or The two-fold objective of the system give both parties--CPD providers and professionals-- equal opportunity to....which includes: (1) application as CPD provider; (2)......
If my corrections are not linguistically correct, please give yours.
Thanks....