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Melvin

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« on: September 15, 2020, 12:51:47 PM »
I saw this post on PRC Fb page posted on September 15, 2020. (see attachment). I did not inlcude the entire post.
Is my correction correct:

The two-fold objective of the system gives CPD providers and professionals  equal opportunity to process......which includes application as CPD provoder, uploading....

or The two-fold objective of the system give both parties--CPD providers and professionals-- equal opportunity to....which includes: (1) application as CPD provider; (2)......

If my corrections are not linguistically correct, please give yours.

Thanks....