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Miss Mae

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Exception in semicolon usage
« on: April 25, 2015, 08:28:03 PM »
You have mentioned in your discussion on semicolons last April 1 that they "serve as a punctuation mark to sort out or provide 'soft conceptual boundaries' between a serial list of items introduced by a colon and that individually require or use commas." Was the publication of Vermilion Gate (Abacus, 819 pages) in Great Britain the reason why the semicolon had been omitted in the following sentence?

As well as Deng Tuo, the column's co-authors included Wu Han, Vice-Mayor of Beijing Municipality and a leading historian of the Ming Dynasty, and Liao Mosha, Director of the United Front Work Department in the Municipal Party Committee.

There should be one between the words Dynasty and and, right?


Joe Carillo

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Re: Exception in semicolon usage
« Reply #1 on: April 26, 2015, 06:47:54 AM »
No, not necessarily. When there's little or no possibility of confusion, a semicolon need not be used to punctuate a series of only two items that consist of the name of each subject followed by just one modifying phrase or description set off by a comma, as in this case of the sentence that you presented:

"As well as Deng Tuo, the column's co-authors included Wu Han, Vice-Mayor of Beijing Municipality and a leading historian of the Ming Dynasty, and Liao Mosha, Director of the United Front Work Department in the Municipal Party Committee."

In such sentences, it generally can still be clearly discerned which subject is modified by what phrase in the serial enumeration, so a comma after the first subject and its  modifying phrase followed by "and" will typically suffice to mark a soft but clear demarcation between them and the second subject and its modifying phrase. In fact, to use a semicolon instead of a comma to mark that demarcation in a serial enumeration of only two subjects and their modifying phrases can give the impression that the writer has a tendency to overpunctuate.

So as a rule for such serial constructions, use a semicolon only when three or more subjects are serially enumerated and when each subject is modified by one or more phrases and modifiers set off by commas, as in the following example:

"As well as Deng Tuo, the column's co-authors included Wu Han, Vice-Mayor of Beijing Municipality and a leading historian of the Ming Dynasty; Liao Mosha, Director of the United Front Work Department in the Municipal Party Committee; and Shao Feng, Chairman of the Historical Committee."

The use of semicolons as soft demarcators will prevent the serial items and their modifiers from becoming a messy, incomprehensible heap of words and phrases.

As to your mention of the publication of Vermilion Gate as a possible reason why the semicolon was omitted in the sentence that you presented, I’m sorry but I didn’t get the connection. You may want to explain that connection for the benefit of the Forum’s readers.
« Last Edit: April 26, 2015, 07:03:13 AM by Joe Carillo »

Miss Mae

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Re: Exception in semicolon usage
« Reply #2 on: April 26, 2015, 03:53:25 PM »
I was just surprised, Sir. I thought British English has another set of rules when it comes to semicolons usage.